I HAD to write this quick short story…it’s Friday after all. I promise I’m going to lay down after this. I know there is more back story here but I haven’t quite figured it out. I think this is a great starting point though. Don’t you?
‘I’ve only seen these panes from the inside. What am I supposed to do now?’ Tess asked the nurse.
‘Well, you’re going to live and prove to others that you are just as normal and sane as everyone else,’ Tess’ nurse reminded her with a gentle hand on her shoulder.
Tess picked up her suitcase turning to give the mental asylum one last look. All she could remember was the pain she felt looking to the outside world through those very same panes of glass. No one was there to pick her up but everything she’d done was in self-defense.
100 Word Count
© Jo Creative PTSD Gal
I love the character portrait here. A very well put together piece.
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Let us hope she is healthy now…
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Oooohhhh!!!! Freaky!!!
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Dear Jo,
Hopefully she’s ready for the outside world. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Sad story, but one filled with hope. Nicely done.
Susan A Eames at
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Thank you 🙂
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Fingers crossed for her, but I wonder if she is ready?
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There are so many questions to be answered but I like how I left the reader wondering and creating their own story 🙂
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